He could only hide a wince at her remark. The fact that he was the last heir of the kingdom was a heavy truth. Indeed, if anything happened to him, the kingdom would fall into turmoil. He still had a cousin, Lilith’s daughter, but since wasn’t Blessed, she had no legitimacy for the throne. The natural structure of his character fairly suited the overall theme of the novel as he learns from his mistakes, and avoided to act on impulses. 2. Lilith

It was also named here the people who took the liberty of hating the son of the hero king for obvious and selfish reasons. Chapter 18: Conspiracy The most common race in every fantasy writing piece is human, and Milia’s being a cow, is an example of race. Later on, we’ll also know more about homunculus, angels, witches, chimeras, phoenixes, and other mythical beings. He had not just been born by two powerful entities, he’d been born a prince. The future King of Lustburg, the only heir apparent. The only Blessed and pure-blood ruler of Lurtburg. If there’s one person who knows Sol more, it would be Milia. Her openness and willingness to always be of his service broke Sol’s resistance to sharing what he truly feels and deliberately coming out of his shell. Not to mention that she also offers extra private sessions where Sol could be very himself. (If you know what I mean) Discover new content on-the-go with WehearBro. Are you for real? I don't know what kind of story you have been reading but all those information aren't supposed to be in CH 1. But as always, life won’t ever stay in the pleasuring moments. His parents died before he could even complete his childhood, leaving him only with his aunt Lilith, and many powerful men had also tried to eliminate him as he pose a great threat to the nearby kingdoms for his hidden power.

Finally you say that my story have no point to hook in people from chapter 1? Sorry but I wouldn't be writing this story for a year now if I didn't have people who were obviously hooked in. She appeared to be in her mid-twenties and she wore no makeup, yet she had a somewhat graceful appearance and sharp features adorning her face.He frowned again, this time a bit deeper, he could feel that there was more to the matter, though he could not really understand what it was,